Character Development

I think that April, Cheryl and the other characters are well developed at this point. The author did a good job at portraying their own point of views of life at this point in the book. I think the characters are believable, I have some suspicion about April and Cheryl's relationship. They seem to lie to each other just so the other does not know the truth, because if one of them told the complete truth it would hurt them. In reality though, telling the truth is better than lying. The truth may hurt more but at least now you know why someone lied maybe to protect you. In my opinion, April and Cheryl are both interesting to me because they remind me of my sister and myself. It seems that my sister Paige has more of her life controlled than I do. April seems to live life in a flow, just like me. The beginning of the book, Cheryl seemed all ready for life but towards the middle her life seems to be going downhill. Paige's life right doesn't not seem to be going downhill so she's good. The story is being told from April's perception and Cheryl's perception. I do trust the narrator because parts of the story actually happened to her and her own sisters. I find the story flowing very well, it has lots of things going on but I think the author did a great job at making the story flow so it wasn't just here is one event and the others. She made sure it flowed perfectly so the reader keeps reading instead of being left with nothing. I don't think I found any holes in plot. I'm very happy the book and how the author had written it from her own experiences.